Winxclub best easter ever new story :)

"Good morning best friends!,happy easter!!.", Bloom said excitedly. "Happy easter.", replies Aisha,Tecna,Stella,Flora,and Musa."Thats right this is your first alfea party .",says Aisha."Yup,what does everyone do when you have a party?"asks Bloom "It depends either staff plans the party and the staff does everything for the party or everyone plans ideas and also helps out.",Tecna  stated. "Ah I see !.",respond back Bloom."This year the staff planned the ideas for the party and did everything for the party.",said back Stella. "Cool !.",reacted Bloom.Bloom,Aisha,Flora
,musa,Tecna,and Flora finish eating breakfast.Girls what do you want to do before the party,"asked Bloom."Shopping.",says Aisha.
"Okay,lets go replied Bloom.Musa,Flora,Tecna,Stella,and Aisha leave the cafteria and the girls walk to outside.The girls arrive out site The girls sit down and wait for the bus."Oh, before i forget.I got you girls something.She gets the gifts out of her purse.She gives them the gift.The girls open them and when they do they  all got braclets. "Wow they are amazing,Thank you so much Bloom.respond back Flora,Tecna,Aisha,Stella,and Musa."Yourwe
clome.answer Bloom. The girls put on their bracelets.The bus arrives.The girls get on the bus.Bloom smiles

Bloom text Sky.Sky he reads the message then he responds back to her. She reads the text also responds back to it.
*Bloom sighs* Whats wrong Bloom?"asks Musa.
"Sky not gonna be able to make it to the party,his family decided last mintute for easter family fun day.His family misses him.Also his family wants him to stay the night.He doesnt want to disappoint his family not showing up.",Bloom tells musa
"Sorry,that stinks,dont worry you still have fun with us at the party .",said Musa "Yeah ! ."claim Aisha,Stella,Flora,and Tenca.Bloom smiles. "K.",replied Bloom 

The girls arrive at the mall  they get off the bus too. The girls walk up to the mall and walk inside. The girls looks at the clothes first.The girls found alot of clothes and they do a fasgion show.After,the fashion the girls go to arcade they play games. Musa does the dance game. The next thing the girls do they do Karaoke Musa and Bloom sing together.After the girls do singing,they play ping pong.  After ping pong ,the girls looks at books and buy a whole alot. The next thing they do photos at the photo booth.When the girls are shopping they get ready for the dance and also the girls already had there dresses in their backpack.The girls finish getting ready and leave the mall.by the time girls arrive at out side the bus coming is on the way. The bus arrives the girls get on.Bloom checks out the stuff she has.The girls arrive at alfea. The girl walk up to alfea and and arrive inside. The girls arrive in the party room.Everyone stars the girls and shocked on how amazing they look.

"Weclome to the easter party,This year us staff have planned art and crafts,savanger present hunt, games, a poem contest,this time only us staff letting you have a food fight.You guys may beign ",Said Head mistress.

The fun beigns.First the girls do arts and carfts. Bloom accidently gets paint on her face and the girls laugh so does Bloom.After the arts and crafts the girls does games next.the girls are playing double cross game and flora wins the game.The next thing the girls do is poems they also write there poems.The girls tells everyone there poems Tecna wins the poem contest she wins a minnie computer.When the girls are done telling everyone there poems everyone does the savanger present hunt. All the girls finds something.Bloom got money,Musa got a musical little piano set,Stella got  a hat,Flora got flower notebook set,and Aisha got a new purple dress. After the savanget present everyone does the food fight.Musa decides to sing and she does.Everyone dance.After the dance,Everyone leave.
Musa,Flora,Bloom,Aisha Stella,and Tecna chili out side and lay on the grass."Im tired,but had so much fun.Never going to forget this day.",said Bloom."Im glad you had fun for your first alfea party ,me either never going to forget this day."replies Flora."Same.",says Aisha,Stella,Musa and Tecna.The girls stare at each other and smile.the end .

Nice story, the grammar is decent but some of it is a little repetitive. I like it though.

glad you do like it  not finish it with yet though

Now its finish for the repetives ones got to think of something  else to say so it wont be repetive I do that later

Cool.