Gravity Falls

It will be a bit jumbled, i'll be using my OCs as replacements, so you'll be seeing some INTERESTING names! This is OBVIOUSLY, based off of Gravity Falls! Lets do this!

Tourist Trapped
Hi there! My name is Jake Pines, and the girl about to puke is my sister, Jenevi. And right now, were being chased by a creature of unimaginable horror! But, don't worry, there's a PERFECTLY logical explanation!

Jake and Jenevi look up at their Grunkle George. "Who wants to hammer these signs up in the 'scary' part of the woods?" He asked.
"Not it!"
"Not it!"
"Also not it!"
"Nobody asked you, Sally." George said as he looked at the female. "I know and im comfortable with that!"
"How about you, Sarah?" George stared at Sarah Corduroy. "I would....but I can't....reach it!" Sarah laughed. "I'd fire all of you if I could."
"Okay, eenie, meenie, miney, YOU!" George pointed at Jake. "Aw, come on! Grunkle George, whenever im in those woods I feel like im being watched! AND, this town gives me the creeps! And its weird! And yesterday, my mosquito bite spelled out 'Beware'!" Jake said as he showed George his mosquito bite. "Kid, that says BEWARB!"


Ok, thats just part one, but how is it? Im trying to not make it ALOT like the show, but its hard! So, of course, this part is ALOT like the show, but I tried to not make it alot like it. So give me some credit!

Tourist Trapped Part 2
Jake sighed as he hammered on the signs. "Nobody believes anything I say..." He heard a ding as he hammered on the tree. "Huh?" He tapped on it. He put his hand on it and cleaned the dust off. He opened the tree up. There were 2 switches. "Woah.." He flipped both switches. Then, behind him, the ground opened up. He turned around and looked in the ground. "What..?" He saw a book, an old book, with six fingers on it, with a black 3 on it. "Wowie!" He picked it up, and blew on it, dust flew off it. He began to read aloud. "Its been 8 months since i've began to investigate the weird happenings of Gravity Falls, Oregon." He read more, then he read. "Trust no one?" He repeated himself, slightly "There is no one you can trust.." Jenevi popped up behind him. "WHAT'CHA READING, JAKE!" She screamed. Jake screamed, startled. "Its nothing!" Jake said quickly, hiding the journal. "Its nothing!" Jenevi mimicked her twin. Jake sighed. "Lets go somewhere private.."

Still, ya know, trying not to make it exactly like the show. I should have skipped this episode...