A Brat's Gain Side Story ~ The Day Peter was not an Idiot

Y'know when I said I'd write stuff about Ally and Abbey a lonngggggg time ago. While, I was bored at school on Thursday and Friday before my jealousy personified itself and I've wrote it!

PS: I did not name it.

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Ally and her sister Abbey were strolling down the busy field. It was lunch time at school. School was a nice break from their insane younger sister Layla, yet their other sister Mari would have to put up with her at school. Milo managed to be able to do nothing at home as he had finished his GSCEs. While thinking of her other siblings, Ally thought of someone she didn't want to see- Peter. Peter was a person in her year who annoyed her deeply. Yet for some reason, he'd never annoy her sister.
 "Ally, are you alright?" Abbey asked while watching her sister space out. Ally jumped a little before nodding and carrying on strolling. "Oh, by the way, have you done the German homework?" Abbey continued in a more casual tone. Immediately, Ally stopped.
 "I... haven't!" Ally gasped in a slightly nervous tone. She turned around and strolled across the field for a bit until a familiar voice called out.
 "Oi! Twin!" the voice called. From this voice, Ally knew who it was. And her sister knew just as well as she did. Her sister didn't seem to care. It was Peter.
"Hi Peter!" Abbey called while waving. Her walked slightly closer to the twins after hearing her call.
"Hey Abbey, can I ask you a question?" he enquired. Quickly, he darted his eyes to Ally who was giving him a stare colder than either of the Earth's Poles.
"Why is your sister so... angry?" he whispered. After this, Ally looked even more furious- this is one of his ways to annoy her. Annoy her a lot.

Oh my goodness! It like evil Layla all over again. I feel bad for the victoms here. Oh boy. I wonder what will happen. ☺ good job on the story.

It's a little different to the original version I wrote. Oh well. just wait for the plot twist hahaha

Can't wait to read it! I would like to see what happens with this one.

I'll add more tomorrow. Soon I'll extend it further.

Okay. I can wait till then.

letsa do it

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Abbey giggled a little bit- she had a very witty response her head.
 "It's because she is- ummmmm I mean, I don't know!" Abbey whispered back while giggling. She turned her head to see that Ally's expression had changed from an irritated one to an almost furious one. However, she decided to just sigh before turning around and walking the other direction towards the library to complete her German homework.
 "What made her so mad?" Peter asked Abbey with a confused tone.
 "I guess sometimes I annoy her too- not as much as Layla though... yikes!" Abbey replied. A thought of Layla's evil smile entered her head, yet she quickly shook it out of her head before anyone could notice.
 After that, she was about to go and follow her sister to apologise when Peter put his hand on her shoulder. Immediately, Abbey decided not to go.
 "Abbey, I have something to ask you..." Peter began, while putting his hand behind is head. Abbey looked confused but nodded quickly.
 "What is it?" She enquired in a positive tone. At this moment, everything stopped. But not in an awkward like when the class falls silent.
 "Abbey... will you go out with me?"

Wow! Epic twist! That is so sweet. Awe. But I would like to know what she says to that question. I will wait for the next part.

Ehehehe I have more than one idea in mind

I'm thinking about which one though xD

Just think which will be best for the story. Or of its possible find a way to do both.

EEEE SQUEEEEEEEE DDGGFFFT YAS SAY YES!!! SAY YES!! I JUST WANT THEM TO GET TOGETHER FOR NOOOREASON!!! WHY AM I HYPER???

cheers m9s

OKAY HERE IS MORE

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Everyone went silent. Did everyone hear? It appeared so. Hundreds of eyes glared towards Peter and Abbey with shocked emotions- some in hope, others in disappointment and some in utter confusion. Peter had not said anything about this. Not a single word.
"I can't believe this!" a voice gasped.
"Answer him!" chanted other voices. Abbey felt frozen in this complete pandemonium. What should say to Peter? She didn't want to upset him- yet she didn't want to show everyone the answer. The pressure built up, ready to explode like an active volcano. To answer, she needed to be alone. With Peter.
"A moment, please," Abbey told everyone in a surprisingly calm tone. She rotated her head around to see the hope from a lot of people's eyes disappear like a phantom. "Come with me, Peter," Abbey told him.
"Yeah alright," he replied casually, not seeming to be bothered by the swarm of other people watching his every move.
"And can no-one else follow us!" Abbey added in a louder voice, making sure everyone could hear her request. Before long, the two ambled off to a quieter place, which people only went to occasionally, and surprisingly, no-one followed. Would Peter get the answer?

I hope she says yes. This would make this story so romantic. I wonder what the answer will be and what will happen after that. Can't wait!

I'm still thinking about which way it should go. I'll decide by tomorrow.

Okay. I will be ready.

Im waiting for the awnser
EEEEEE

I'm sorry for procrastinating guys

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After a journey weaving around the hundreds of other students at the school (and getting some looks that hinted one or two things) Abbey and Peter arrived at the place. As expected, it was empty. There wasn't even any noise from any footsteps upstairs, presumably because everyone was outside enjoying the last few days of the school year in the summer sun.
"So, the answer? What is it?" Peter asked. Abbey looked around to make sure no one was coming. Fortunately for her, no one was, and no one was even in her sight.
"Okay, my answer, it is... a yes!" Abbey whispered joyfully. At this second, everything felt like it changed. Peter seemed happy enough with the answer. And the newly formed couple began to hug. They hugged for a little while. However, not too long after this, footsteps echoed on the steps above Peter and Abbey. Who could it be? Abbey prayed it wasn't someone familiar. She turned around to see a familiar rucksack and a girl with extremely familiar hair.
"Stay quiet," Abbey whispered in the lowest tone she could muster to Peter. Then she tip-toed a few steps, hoping not to be heard. The girl appeared not to hear anything. Abbey tip-toed back under the stairs, they resumed hugging until the familiar voice which belonged to the familiar girl with the familiar rucksack spoke out.
"Abbey, what are you doing?" it asked. It was Ally...

She said yes! Yay! Omg a big twister at the end. Uh-oh what is going to happen next? Only Minako knows. Haha.

Unless I make it up as I go along.

Yes that is true. I know people that do that.

*cough* i do that, nothing is planned in my stories

anyways

OMG FINALLY MY LIFE HAS JUST BEGUN AHHHHHH

lolsteph