A beautful night turns out bad story part 1

Ivy and her two best friends name Brandon and Emily at Ivy house laying down on the grass chilling looking at the stars.

"Its so pretty out tonight.",said Ivy
"Yup,wish we could stay here forever.never stop enjoying this night.",replies Emily
"Same wish too.",says Brandon

Hey do you guys hear really scary sound right now?" asks Brandon
"No I didn't.", said Ivy
"Me either.",replies Emily
Brandon hears a scary sound again
The noise is coming from a ghost
The ghost does evil laugh again and plays music
"I swear I hear scary loud sound.", says Brandon
"Stop trying to scare us.",said Ivy
"Yeah don't ruin the night.",replies Emily.
"I swear I do. i'm not missing with you best pals.",says Brandon
"Yeah sure.", said Emily

The ghost says hahahaha and does evil laugh again
Ivy hears the noise now and so does Emily
"No way it cant be a ghost.",replies Ivy
The ghost goes up to them and says boo
Ivy, Brandon,and Emily shocked.

to be continued...

Hope you guys like my story

Cool! It was amazing just some grammar problems but I don't want to ruin your mood

Aw glad you told me and glad you like it

Your welcome! Also...this is supposed to be in Creativity :p

Oh okay

Yeah, Steph is right (thanks Steph).

On the story, it certainly has a good idea. Although I agree about the grammar. But grammar can always be improved! It's still a good story though.

fixed the grammar gonna fix the grammar on all my stories cause gonna publish my story hope you girls will buy my story of course not gonna publish it until done with the fifth chapter

Amazing Job ! :clapping:

Thx^^